Conrad Rice

A very interesting little piece, and one of the few short pieces I have seen that is good as is without any expounding. Very good.

I liked this. Even with the grammatical errors and such it was a sound story. I only wish that you had continued with it rather than bringing it to such ...

This is an okay poem, imho the only thing that turns me off is all the anger and resentment towards love. That's a personal thing though. Maybe expounding on the ...

This is a very good piece of poetry. Short, but extremely good. The imagery conveyed in this is very powerful and vivid. Kudos!